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posted by [identity profile] trinsf.livejournal.com at 10:53pm on 2004-01-28
A revision, suggested by my son:

warm wind breaks silence
pungent scent follows behind
dang, those beans were good


He thinks it's superior because it starts out as a nature haiku, until the last line.
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posted by [identity profile] dglenn.livejournal.com at 07:16pm on 2004-01-29
I like it.
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