Δαφνη Ευτυχια Αρθουρος

I like both versions---the gas-brake-gas-brake is visible (feel-ible?) in the finished version, but also in the original. Although I think it's more Beltway-on-rush-hour type in the tetrameter version...crawl-leap-crawl-leap instead of go-go-go-brake go-go-go-brake (that's more like Route 1 with traffic lights set badly).

Something funny is I was halfway playing with a poem with "patience" as the key word as well, but my subject matter is pottery *grin*.